Feed back on powerpoint

Overall the feedback on my power point was positive and very constructive and from this i have been able to make changes to the plans of my magazine. Some of these changes include...

• Decreasing the price of my magazine instead of making it free so that my losses are not so great.
• The teacher also liked the idea of hvaing two contents pages.
• Some fellows class mates thought that the name of the magazine didnt really make sense or they thought it was irellevant but I stuck by its foundations. 
• At the end of the powerpoint I was not sure which font i should used so i decided to go and find a different one.
• I also changed the nae of my magazine to HOLLA MG because I think it is better than just HOLLA.

Other than this i have not yet changed anything about what was shown in the presentation.